Off the bat—MC looks great and his personality makes the game fun to play. I really enjoyed having Jalen as a buddy too, solid wingman energy.

Now let’s talk about Alyssa… wow. Didn’t see that coming. I thought her path would be just another quick fling, but it totally caught me off guard. It felt fun, real, and surprisingly intimate—definitely my favorite LI so far.

That said, some parts felt a bit rushed. A lot of the other relationships came off shallow and forced. The pacing early on didn’t feel very realistic. I also wish the story dove deeper into the MC’s past—especially with something as heavy as his dad’s situation, it didn’t quite hit the emotional depth it could’ve.

Still, there’s a lot of potential here. The vibes are great, Alyssa’s story has me hooked, and I’m really hoping the writing levels up in the next chapters. Looking forward to seeing how it grows.